i wait by the phone everyday
but u never call......?
i get ready for u to come
but u never show up.......?
i tel u important things
but u never listen......?
i say I LOVE U
but u never ANSWER.....?
i write u mail
but u never RESPOND.....?
i ask if u LOVE me, i ask if u care
but u never said anythin..never answerd me ....!!
u make me feel sick
u make me feel so lonly.......
i hate u :)
12 comments:
welcum to bloggin...
so emotional nd well written one
keep it up nd gudluk ;)
niice. m so proud of ma baby *sniff sniff* now stop the brooding and smile.
xxoo
ic. i guess it didnt take much effort to come up with that one but nice ingey
wow its a nice poem!
its gud u wrote "i hate u " and u smiled
now smile
nice!! u can b a gud writer .. thats if u think of him always ... lol
nuts
simple but nice...keep it up :D
princess!! nice poem. keep it up...i think dat ull b a gud writer sum day if u keep on writin things like dis!!hehe...luv ya
im so proud of my self ( sniffs snifffsss) such kindnessss...dhefaaga hifaa aadheys kuri ma comment mi kurani....( sniffs sniffss)
this is the beats thing u ever did...keep it up girll..i'll be proud of u always....ummmaks
hey it is cool nie poems dhooo..... gud keep it up the gud work.cheeers
thankk u xhariyan :) u tooo keep it up
Hello Hidden POET!
gr8 work!
always =D wen u say u hate him!
cheers
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